I was just talking to Aeriel about potentially hiring help for product photography yesterday, and then this brand showed up. That was quick, Meta.
I’m talking about Burst Creative Studio. They’re an all-around media partner and service provider. Like, really all-around. They rent out studios for shoots, take care of your social media content, and even cover events.
When you visit their website, you’ll get what they do right away. They have this direct-to-the-point, no BS voice and tone on their message, which is good. But I think it could use more personality.
Being clear and professional is solid, but adding personality? That’s what makes people care.
Content Creation and Social Media Management
Your brand is awesome, but you need the right eyes to see it. We plan, create, and manage content that attracts those eyes. It’s a structured approach that embraces your authenticity and stays attuned to your audience. It’s the digital presence you need. But without the burnout.
Original copy (at the time of revamp):
Product Photography
Videos hook people in, but images sell your products. We know how to make them look their absolute best. Simply submit your products, we’ll talk about it, we’ll work on it, then we’ll give you ready-to-use and ready-to-convert marketing assets.
Original copy (at the time of revamp):
Creative Studio Rental
Creativity doesn’t wait for the perfect place. But if it did, this would be it. A state-of-the-art studio. Top-tier equipment and resources. Staffed by seasoned industry pros. This is where creative ideas come to life.
Original copy (at the time of revamp):
Event Coverage
In every event, there’s a different energy, a different vibe. Whether you’re the event planner or a plus one, we want you to feel it and be part of it. In case you need to remember, worry not. We’ll deliver a polished product that tells the story of that night.
Original copy (at the time of copy):
Overall: It’s okay. My general goal with Burst is to add the personality, and I think I did it here. I wanted to keep the voice of a “direct-to-the-point professional,” so I didn’t put any twist on the service title.
Instead, the main focus of the revamp was placed on making the reader feel like the brand will take a lot of weight off their shoulders. I wanted to make them feel like ‘Burst Creative Studio takes it from here, just do your thing, be creative.’
Total time spent on writing: 55 minutes. Pretty quick, since all I really did was layer on what was already there.
I wanted to include more specific benefits—like what the service covers or what the process looks like—but those details weren’t on the current site. And of course, I’m not one to make things up.
That kind of info would make a big difference, tho. Adding just a bit of structure to the service descriptions wouldn’t just save your team time when talking to clients—it would also build trust with every visitor who lands on the page.
Because in any biz, the most important currency (next to cash) is trust. Earn them, and that cash will slide down your pocket without extra hitch.
I happen to know how to do that through writing marketing pieces. If you need it, slide down my email.
